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Post by firehawk11 on Jun 21, 2011 11:59:04 GMT -5
Name: Dual Nightingales Type: Weapon Element: Darkness Info: These twin guns are Veon’s pride and joy. These pistols are quiet large for the average gunner to use as secondary weapons. The pistols are black with hints of dark purple along each side. When in combat the guns can only be normally shot 5 times before needing reloading.
Name: Trinket Type: Tool Element: Darkness Info: This Trinket allows Veon to locate his allies and his enemies no matter what stands in the way. When Veon opens this a blue pin appears in the center showing where he is, then if anyone is around three different colour pins appear. Red is for enemies, green is for allies, and grey is for neutral. Veon can also see what world his allies are in by pressing another button on the bottom of the trinket. This opens a map of all of the worlds and shows where Veon’s allies and enemies are.
Name: Dark Aurora Type: Tool Element: Darkness Info: This little palm big device is a special weapon Veon created himself. This device can be used anywhere to open up a portal to the door of darkness allowing heartless to enter the world under his control. The portal only allows heartless to travel though.
Name: Nightmare Type: Item Element: Darkness Info: This handle device holds a Keyboard which will go to what every world Veon wants by just simply saying the world’s name.
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Post by Crow on Jun 21, 2011 12:05:39 GMT -5
Change the element of Nightmare to darkness and the Type Tool to Item. Other than that, these are alright! So I guess I'll give you the grade, but make the changes.
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