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Post by jadenmei on Jun 11, 2011 11:28:23 GMT -5
Name: Dark Armor Type: Defense Element: Dark Description: The Dark Armor uses the darkness eminating off of the heartless in the world. It then creates a shroud type of armor around Jadens body that is as strong as steal.
Name: Dark Rider Type: N/A Element: Dark Description: A rider that was based off of the Keyblade Rider. It allows Jaden to travel from world to world until he learns how to use the Corridor to Darkness.
Name: Blade of the Envoy Type: Offensive Element: Dark Description: The blade of the envoy is one of the greatest weapons of Radiant Garden. Jaden stole this weapon shortly before he put himself to sleep. It was then turned into a blade of darkness and can be formed at will from the darkness.
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Post by Crow on Jun 11, 2011 11:32:28 GMT -5
Everything is alright, but the element of Dark Rider kinda stands out from the rest. You got Darkness and Dark. Since the majority is Darkness then just change Dark to Darkness. Other than that, you're ok so I will give to you:
1/2!
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Post by Angelo on Jun 12, 2011 20:52:39 GMT -5
2/2
-Will Edit-
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